Friday, November 02, 2007

My Favorite Vacation by Samar Al Ansari

My favorite vacation is when I went to America. America is full of fun, especially Disney Land. When I went to Disney Land, I went on all sorts of rides and I played all sorts of games. I saw a parade and it was beautiful. I saw the play "Beauty and the Beast" and, at night, there would be fireworks. Another fun place is Universal Studios. In Universal I watched a play about the Flintstones and I watched the hilarious T.V. show "Lucy". Well this is my favorite vacation.

Samar Al Ansari
Grade 5D
September 22,1999

Teacher's Comment: Very well written. Your sentence work is superb!

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